Blog Entry #10

March 30, 2009

After I read over my rough draft of my auto ethnography it obviously needs to be doubled in length to fulfill the ten-page requirement. One way I plan on making it longer is by explaining my thoughts on how my struggles with my sense essays showed me who I am as a writer. I will also explain more on how I thought of the subject and genres of each essay.

All of the paragraphs need more work to make it better, especially explaining how I found myself as a writer through the timeline of writing the individual essays and blogs. I don’t think it needs anymore outside sources than my other essays for examples. I do think I need to work on the transitions, but when I explain the relationships between the essays and my progress as a writer that should do a good enough job transitioning naturally.